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Monday, 6 November 2017




first I did a plan and then I wrote my store and then I highlight my topic sentences. I learned that writing a topic sentence was easy. The hard part was doing the plan. and the easy part was doing the writing and the topic sentences. 

can you guy live a nice posted comment to my writing? 

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  1. Anonymous7 November 2017 at 09:52

    Kia Ora Mana,
    You have done a very good job of using topic sentences and then following up with elaboration and explaining.

    I would love to know more about your personality in your writing. I know you, but I want to know more about the Mana outside of school. What position do you play in Rugby?

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  2. Anonymous1 December 2017 at 12:53

    hi mana i like the story about your family and likes aro dislike but i can't see the WALT rugby sam

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