This is a record of my learning during my time at Park Estate Primary School
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Friday, 1 September 2017
I am learning to writing like a year 6.
First I had a listen with Sally and then I went away and done it on my own. I learned about writing 4 paired and hiliting the word's and put the word's into sites. The easy thing was writing the sites in my writing. The hard thing was put the word in the writ ordered.
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Hey Mana, These are some really great ideas here in your writing. I can see you have grouped your work really well because as I read it I thought about the problems and then the solutions, then I found out what Michelle could do to help. Maybe next time you could get a buddy to check it to make sure it makes sense. It's always hard to see little mistakes in your own work.
Hey Mana,
ReplyDeleteThese are some really great ideas here in your writing.
I can see you have grouped your work really well because as I read it I thought about the problems and then the solutions, then I found out what Michelle could do to help.
Maybe next time you could get a buddy to check it to make sure it makes sense. It's always hard to see little mistakes in your own work.